I need someone to please revise my paper and make it sound less hyperintelligent. Please break it down in high school grammar since I don't use highly intelligent words or sentences. Replace wording

I need someone to please revise my paper and make it sound less hyperintelligent.  Please break it down in high school grammar since I don't use highly intelligent words or sentences. Replace wording that sounds too smart into generic sentences/words.

The tutor did not follow my directions and made it sound too proper and too precocious. English is my second language and the paper sounds too perfect with words I dont normally use or communicate with

Please no AI help either.

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PAPER  that needs to be re-written